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Mohtaram budki sahab..........! aaj tak maine sirf aapki nasri jaulaainiya'n hi dekhi thi'n, aaj pehli martaba aapki nazm parhi, mozu, technic, usloob, zuban-o-bayan har etbaar se ye 1 shaahkaar nazm hai, ye nazm apne irteqaa se aakhir tak sehar-andaaz bayaniya ki mazhar hai, climex tak aate aate nazm apni daad khud wasool karne ki salaahiyat rakhti hai. is behtareen nazm k liye aapki qalmi raf'ato'n ko salaam karta hun. .......FIDA
Thank you for your appreciation of my Poem. In fact I only pen down my thoughts in poetic form when I find that prose cannot do justice to my specific thoughts.Still however my first love remains prose only.
Budki Sahib........! Apki is nazm ko par kar aisa mahsoos hota he jaise kuch dinon ke bad Aapki Afsana nigari par Aapki nazm nigari Ghalib Ajayegi (agar nazm par qarare wqa'e multafit rahe) goke Aapki pechaan aik afsana nigar ki hesiyat se he,magar (is nazm ko par kar) aisa maloom hotahe jase Aapke sene main aik Afsana nigar se ziyada aik Sha'ir ka Dil Dhraktahe. Aapki ye nazm is mozu par harfe Aakhir he. aisi benazeer nazm pesh karne kiliye mubarakbad qabool farmayen.Allah kare zore qalam aur ziyada. AAMEEN
Qasim Bin Zaheer Sahab Yeh aap ki muhabatein hain jo bahut kuch likh gayein Warna to hum apne aap ko is qabil nahi samajhte. Kabhi kabhi dil nazm kehne ke liye beqarar ho jaata hai to likh leta hoon.
Bahut hi achha! Maasha-Alah dil ko chooney waali nashtar chalaa leytey ho. Yehin Kahein Aap aur Hum bhi kabhi miley they, Khuda ki bairukhi se nawaakif kaise bichdey hum, Na tum jaano na hum jaaney.
Bahut Khoob. Maasha-Alah badhey hi andaaz main teerey nashter chalatey hain aap. Andaazey bayan aap ka dil cheerta hai.
Yahein kahein hum Aap se miley they kabhi, Na jaaney kis moad pey bichad gaye hum kahein, Kudrat ki Bairukhi se baikhabar,bikhar gaye hum kis kadar, Na tum jaano na hum jaaney.
handoovijay : Bhai hum to abhi tifl-e-maktab thehre , hum kahan isalh de payein ge. Haan apne DAV school ke ustad SNKachroo ke alfaz duhrate hain;"Write and read it over and over again , u will urself find where it needs to be corrected".Nothing is better than self evaluation and self criticism. Aur main aaj tak is naseehat ki tameel karta hoon.
नज़्म शानदार है ....बधाई ....
ReplyDeleteइक छोटी अर्जी है दादा .....फोन्ट थोड़े से बड़े कर दीजिये |
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Deleteبہت خوب جناب بدکی صاحب
ReplyDeleteعمدہ نظم ہے
آپ نے کچھ مناظر کو بڑی خوبصورتی سے الفاظ کا پیکر دیا ہے
بہت عمدہ
Bahut bahut shukriya Asrar Ahmad Razi Sb.
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Huma Ahmar.
DeleteMohtaram budki sahab..........!
ReplyDeleteaaj tak maine sirf aapki nasri jaulaainiya'n hi dekhi thi'n, aaj pehli martaba aapki nazm parhi, mozu, technic, usloob, zuban-o-bayan har etbaar se ye 1 shaahkaar nazm hai, ye nazm apne irteqaa se aakhir tak sehar-andaaz bayaniya ki mazhar hai, climex tak aate aate nazm apni daad khud wasool karne ki salaahiyat rakhti hai.
is behtareen nazm k liye aapki qalmi raf'ato'n ko salaam karta hun.
.......FIDA
Thank you for your appreciation of my Poem. In fact I only pen down my thoughts in poetic form when I find that prose cannot do justice to my specific thoughts.Still however my first love remains prose only.
Deleteso beautiful poem.. आपके हर शब्द पत्थर दिल को भी जीवंत कर देते हैं
ReplyDeleteBhai aap ka bahut bahut shukr guzar hoon.
DeleteBudki Sahib........!
ReplyDeleteApki is nazm ko par kar
aisa mahsoos hota he jaise
kuch dinon ke bad
Aapki Afsana nigari par
Aapki nazm nigari
Ghalib Ajayegi (agar nazm par
qarare wqa'e multafit rahe)
goke Aapki pechaan aik afsana
nigar ki hesiyat se he,magar
(is nazm ko par kar)
aisa maloom hotahe jase
Aapke sene main aik
Afsana nigar se ziyada
aik Sha'ir ka Dil Dhraktahe.
Aapki ye nazm is mozu par
harfe Aakhir he.
aisi benazeer nazm pesh
karne kiliye mubarakbad qabool
farmayen.Allah kare zore qalam aur ziyada.
AAMEEN
Qasim Bin Zaheer Sahab Yeh aap ki muhabatein hain jo bahut kuch likh gayein Warna to hum apne aap ko is qabil nahi samajhte. Kabhi kabhi dil nazm kehne ke liye beqarar ho jaata hai to likh leta hoon.
DeleteBahut hi achha! Maasha-Alah dil ko chooney waali nashtar chalaa leytey ho.
ReplyDeleteYehin Kahein Aap aur Hum bhi kabhi miley they,
Khuda ki bairukhi se nawaakif kaise bichdey hum,
Na tum jaano na hum jaaney.
God Bless.
Shukriya handoovijay Sb Aap ka comment spam file mein chala gaya tha. Aaj hi pata chala.Bahut bahut shukriya.
DeleteBahut Khoob. Maasha-Alah badhey hi andaaz main teerey nashter chalatey hain aap. Andaazey bayan aap ka dil cheerta hai.
ReplyDeleteYahein kahein hum Aap se miley they kabhi,
Na jaaney kis moad pey bichad gaye hum kahein,
Kudrat ki Bairukhi se baikhabar,bikhar gaye hum kis kadar,
Na tum jaano na hum jaaney.
God Bless!
handoovijay ji bahut bahut shukriya. Aap ki muhabatein saath rahien to hum aasmanon par bhi kamand phaink sakte hain.
DeleteOoper ki pangthiyan mere pehli koshish thi. Aap ki islah nawazish hogi.
Deletehandoovijay : Bhai hum to abhi tifl-e-maktab thehre , hum kahan isalh de payein ge. Haan apne DAV school ke ustad SNKachroo ke alfaz duhrate hain;"Write and read it over and over again , u will urself find where it needs to be corrected".Nothing is better than self evaluation and self criticism. Aur main aaj tak is naseehat ki tameel karta hoon.
DeleteWah... Wah kya khoob nazam kahi hai Bhai.Bimal Misri
ReplyDeleteBimal Misri Pasandeedgi ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.
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