واہ! بہت ہی پُراثر کہانی ہے۔ زنددہ رہنا ہے تو درندوں کے گروہ میں شامل ہونا ناگزیر ہے ورنہ انجام بتانا نہیں ہے،سامنے نظر آرہا ہے۔ آپ کی کہانیاں اکثر سماج پر چوٹ بھی لگاتی ہیں اور کچھ سبق بھی دے جاتی ہیں۔
arshad neyaz Sb Kahani pasand karne aur tasurat qalmband karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ne sahih farmaya ki meri kahaniyon mein samaji ma'anwiat milti hai.Darasal mein apne mu'ashre se hi apne kirdar aur plot dhoondhta hoon aur phir un ko takhayul ke qalib mein dalta hoon.
Thought provoking! If everyone just becomes part of the system then there will never be any change, but change is a constant in our universe, so some of us must still be effecting it:) Loved the story!
Huma Ahmar I usually write direct narrative stories but in a few stories I have used symbolism to a great extent eg Jago,Ghonsla, Zebra Crossing par Khada Aadmi and Ehtejaj.In Oriental world our expectations are belied more often than not by those who belong to our class and promise us a bright future but they ultimately fail us which is much worse than when feudal lords and powerful people exploit us.
Aaj kal hamaray mulk may jis khisam ki siyasat chal rahi hai us par is say behtar tabsirati kahani shayad hi likhi gayee ho... Deepak Budki saheb apni kahaniyoun may samaj ki chubti sacch-chaayeeyoun ko jis khoobsurati say ujaltay hain o apni jagah munfarid hai... ek behtareen kahani share karnay ka bayhad shukriya...
واہ! بہت ہی پُراثر کہانی ہے۔
ReplyDeleteزنددہ رہنا ہے تو درندوں کے گروہ میں شامل ہونا ناگزیر ہے ورنہ انجام بتانا نہیں ہے،سامنے نظر آرہا ہے۔
آپ کی کہانیاں اکثر سماج پر چوٹ بھی لگاتی ہیں اور کچھ سبق بھی دے جاتی ہیں۔
arshad neyaz Sb Kahani pasand karne aur tasurat qalmband karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Aap ne sahih farmaya ki meri kahaniyon mein samaji ma'anwiat milti hai.Darasal mein apne mu'ashre se hi apne kirdar aur plot dhoondhta hoon aur phir un ko takhayul ke qalib mein dalta hoon.
DeleteThought provoking! If everyone just becomes part of the system then there will never be any change, but change is a constant in our universe, so some of us must still be effecting it:) Loved the story!
ReplyDeleteHuma Ahmar I usually write direct narrative stories but in a few stories I have used symbolism to a great extent eg Jago,Ghonsla, Zebra Crossing par Khada Aadmi and Ehtejaj.In Oriental world our expectations are belied more often than not by those who belong to our class and promise us a bright future but they ultimately fail us which is much worse than when feudal lords and powerful people exploit us.
DeleteAaj kal hamaray mulk may jis khisam ki siyasat chal rahi hai us par is say behtar tabsirati kahani shayad hi likhi gayee ho... Deepak Budki saheb apni kahaniyoun may samaj ki chubti sacch-chaayeeyoun ko jis khoobsurati say ujaltay hain o apni jagah munfarid hai... ek behtareen kahani share karnay ka bayhad shukriya...
ReplyDeleteAsangani Mushtaq Shukriya. Aap ke tasurat fikrangez aur hausla afza hote hain.
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