Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Lakshmi Ka Swagat, لکشمی کا سواگت : (Urdu/Hindi); Afsancha; Laghu Kahani; افسانچہ

Lakshmi Ka Swagat, لکشمی کا سواگت :
(Urdu/Hindi) 
 Afsancha; Laghu Kahani; افسانچہ 
  लक्ष्मी का स्वागत 

"लक्ष्मी आई है बेटा लक्ष्मी। हमारे घर लक्ष्मी आई है।" बहु के घर में क़दम रखते ही विद्यासागर के पिता जी ख़ुशी से झूम उठे। 

बहु उम्मीद से ज़्यादा दहेज लेकर आई थी फिर भी विद्यासागर को शांति नहीं मिल रही थी। वह सरस्वती की तलाश में मारा मारा फिर रहा था। उसे समझ नहीं आ रहा था कि हर बहु लक्ष्मी का रूप ही क्यों धारण करती है, सरस्वती का क्यों नहीं? 

सरस्वती की तलाश में विद्यासागर दर-दर भटकता रहा। अंतत: उसने घर से बहुत दूर एक आश्रम में शरण ली और लक्ष्मी को हमेशा के लिए भूल गया।  

                  
                           


















22 comments:

  1. بہت عمدہ فکر ہے
    مختصر مگر اثرانگیز
    بہت خوب

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    1. Shukriya Asrar Ahmad Razi Sb Aap ke tasurat achche lagte hain.

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  2. Kaha jata hai ki..
    "Vidya ke abhav me buddhi nahi aati hai,
    Buddhiheen ko dhan nahi milta,
    dhanheen ke mitra nahi hotey,
    aur mitra ke bina sukh nahi hai."
    Jaisa ki aapki mini story hai. uske mutabik agar saraswati ghar me ho to laxmi svyam ayengi..
    Kafi umda baat kahi hai aapne is miny story se...
    Ise share karne ke liye shukriya

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    1. Thanks Sanjeev Hingwasia for ur thoughtful comments.

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  3. सार्थक!! कथा!!

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  4. It is said that Lakshami and Saraswati are the enemy of each others and both can not reside in a home.Lakshami needs a world where she can decive the people and Saraswati needs aloofness and a true world.This is reason vidia sagar takes shelter in an alone cottage.
    Really It's a successful shortest story.

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    1. arshad neyaz bhai tasurat ke liye shukr guzar hoon.

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  5. I am intrigued by the underlying thought that must have lead to this concept of the story. This is beautiful, Sir!!!

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    1. Totha Belated thanks for your apprciation of my mini story. your comments are always thought provoking. Plz become member of my two blogs if you like.
      deepak.blogspot.com
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    2. Plz read budkis3dview.wordpress.com @Totha

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  6. कोशिश खुद में मारक है, चिंतन को दू जाती है । बधाइ ।

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    1. मनोज अबोध This is inbuilt in the system and I am no expert. Thanks anyway. Sorry for delayed response.

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  8. واہ،بہت عمدہ و پر اثر تحریر
    آپ کے اچھوتے اورگہری سوچ کے دھارے
    ایک دفع تو بندے کو جکڑ لیتے ہیں ،

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  9. Sir
    Laxmi is maya[money and also illusion].and Saraswati is Gyan [budhhi+ vivek], buddhi is knowledge which may consist cleverness and deception.If one uses knowledge without vivek [element of Atma],one can become what he/she wants to .Applying vivek/Atma and thinking about others and whole world ,one has to give-up elements of Maya to become Saraswati.
    DUALITY or dwaitvad is the essentience of life. What is true ,that is also untrue.without death there is no life, If there is life ,there must be death.Life is a paradox.

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    1. op sb thanks for your thoughtful comments and liking the mini story.

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